I am trying to rework this line for my romantic novel:acolucky (64)in #punchline • 6 years ago "Her kiss was like a bowl of white rice mixed with oatmeal. No sugar or salt. I choked it down in gasps, but was full from it all day." Maybe it is beautiful enough without any changes. #humor #jokes #love #writing
haha, depending on which direction the plot of the novel goes on
Lol, the great work begins with such changes, haha