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RE: Postcards from Rio--@v4vapid 's Conspiracy Writing Contest #3
I'm just the caboose on the Writer's Block train of those that read this in the queue with nothing to crit. Outstanding piece Rhonda. Fantastic moment of revelation for your character and the tension just built from there. I enjoyed this very much.
Thank you! :-)
Dear @aksounder:
You ever so much more than a mere caboose.
(Or a cattle car, for that matter.)
You're one of the pistons pumping the engine -
(Do train engines have pistons...?)
Er... WE LOVE YOU!
(Now, to get that song "Little Red Caboose, chug chug chug" unstuck from my head)
The pistons of a steam locomotive are forced back and forth by high-pressured steam
Piston | Locomotive Wiki | FANDOM powered by Wikia
Little Red Caboose (With Train Sound Effects) - Rocking Horse Records https://youtu. be/kuqtzn4_Afk via @YouTube
Hahaha aww shucks, thanks Rhino. I merely meant I was the last one to come leave a comment here after reading this in the queue in the wee hours last night.
I'll gladly be a piston pushing our steem engine along!
By the time I got here, you were no longer a caboose (last one to comment)
If that excuses my confusement