Burning Human
Gasoline for breakfast
Charcoal for lunch
Volcanic ash for dinner
Burning human
What did you expect?
Fire in the belly
Burning footsteps
Magma eyes
Mind like volcanic ash
Orange fiery hair
Smell of burning flesh
Screams in the distance
Calm eyes in the burning human
Obliteration of the senses
Synapses snap, neuronal pathways degrade
Receptors unravel
Burning flesh, burning corpse, burning human
@RiskDebonair
Irish Writer, Poet, & Lover
Definitely way better than all other poems that i had to read in school.. I love that darkish poetry.
Thank you!
This was extremely visual! That last 4 lines captivated me and the scene was so vivid in my mind!
Well done!
great to share..
good writting.
upvoted
beautiful writing, nice poetry, good post, thanks for sharing
very good, thank you
nothing left for burning except humanity, excellent poem.
you are write such a great poem.........about human being ..........now a days people live there life.......as you say.........we have to care ourselves.....
Though it's written in blank verse.....but it takes the full zest of harmonic motion..... burning humanity, thanks @riskdebonair