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RE: Steemit Is The Most Excellent Investment Solution

in #promo-steem7 years ago

@suheri, I would like to give you some English language skills coaching for this article.

Then, usually a question is raised again, "But it's just to say that Steemit is good for investment, what's hard?"

This sentence is difficult to understand. I am not sure what you are trying to say here. Could you try putting it another way, and see if that helps make it more understandable?

Yes, it is not difficult to answer and make a list of what benefits can be in Steemit because with you buy Steem and make your Steem Power bigger then your profits can be bigger, its performance is very easy and you also create your own job with active write a blog or you are a photography that produces good photos. However, investing in steam instead of silent just gets the financial benefits that you can increase if you do not contribute to others.

Here is a suggestion for structuring the sentences of this paragraph:

  • It is not difficult to answer this question, and make a list of the benefits in Steemit. First, if you buy Steem and increase your Steem Power, your profits can be larger. You can also create your own job by actively writing a blog, or creating articles featuring your photography.

I was not certain what you meant by the following pieces:

its performance is very easy

However, investing in steam instead of silent just gets the financial benefits that you can increase if you do not contribute to others.

Again, if you could try to say these in a different way, maybe I could better understand what you are trying to communicate.

You are able to edit your article any time before the payout freeze, so if you would like to go back an forth in the comments to improve your sentences I am glad to help you more.

I've upvoted and resteemed this article as one of my daily post promotions for the @mitneb Curation Trail Project. It will be featured in the @mitneb Curation Trail Project Daily Report for 26 JAN 2018.

Cheers!

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Okay Friend I have improved the writing. Please review again @mitneb

Looking better, @suheri.

What does this mean?

person who is berivestai ...?

Cheers!

Okay I fix my friends ..

Thank My friend @mitneb

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