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RE: Closed Beta of Smackdown Kitty begins
If I had to give you one tip, it would be to let more space into your posts and to trim them down a bit. Remove "excess" writing (even though you'll obviously not feel like it is) whenever you can, unless it's meant to drive the person reading it in some way.
At the same time, I'll acknowledge this is just me an ideological theorist and no longer currently a marketer, telling you a professional marketer what to do.
You're already on a good path. I'll have a look from time to time. =)
I get what you are saying about excess writing. So basically I must just get to the point, keep things interesting and not ramble on for 5 minutes to make a point :D
What do you mean by 'let more space into your posts' though? :)
hehe well more or less, maybe it's also sometimes about how many words you use to convey something in a sentence more than actually how much time you spend on it. It can be hard to develope an objective standard for such things thoughs.
By more space, I mean break things up a little more often, create more paragraphs, insert a stylized gif header sometimes rather than the regular text header. But also this can be hard to pin down and is also something that might just be your style of writing. Changing it could actually make very little sense if that's part of your copy-writing skill.
I know several marketers here write posts that I would never try to write and that I wouldn't read unless they came from them personally. :p I guess it's not quite universal which style works for who.
Bro, just a heads up, stop upvoting your comments because they are all being downvoted by @Smackdown.Kitty xD
So in conclusion, are you saying I should try and change my writing style a bit, or are you saying that since it's the way I write I should just stick to it? Just a little confused haha! :P
Well that's the idea for testing purposes 😃
I think you should make a change, but I could be wrong that's all I'm saying.
Oh lol so you're helping with the beta testing haha! I get it now :P
Okay, thanks! I will take your opinion into account :) Appreciate you taking time out to help others. It's very kind of you brother! I am going to start writing my next post now.