My First Notes

in #prameshtyagi • 7 years ago

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When the first notes played,
You strolled through my mind.
And when I asked you to leave,
You politely declined.

You gaze into my eyes,
And the chorus plays again.
Now you've left me alone,
But in my songs you remain.

#life #poetry #creative #music
7 years ago in #prameshtyagi by
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     7 years ago 

    WOW i can feel too many things through ua such a sweet and melidious lines....btw u have expressed it in such a way trust me it seems that ...YOu are madly in love or u have loved madly and got what everyone gets of loving unconditionally ....btw thanks alot for such a Amazing lines ...love the way u expressed @renutyagi

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       7 years ago 

      Thank you so much!

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         7 years ago 

        Nice words. Is that lyrics of some song or your own poetry?

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           7 years ago 

          This is definitely my favorite type of poetry. Short, precise and soooo beautiful.

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             7 years ago 

            Thank you! Please check out my other works.

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