Dance with me
There are a lot of memories I have now of my life; this is one of the most poignant...
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I was the aged in the song that you took pity on.
You were the dancing girl, the love lode, and priceless.
Death was your partner in the moment all yours as we danced the moments away on the dance floor of life.
Life was your excuse to let it all go and give yourself all that you were.
As we danced I found that I was but a moment of your beauty that you shared
As around and around we went, faster and faster until I couldn’t hold on to you anymore.
Letting you go, I came to rest; and held out my hands to you to come back to me.
But you were gone from my arms; flown away, to a place I could not follow.
Time is a funny bedfellow, it gives so much, and yet it gives nothing at all.
You were timeless to me, and touched my soul, saying: I am not here for long, take me now, I’m all yours.
But as I reached for you I found that you were the quicksilver and gone too soon to be reached for.
I remember you now, after all this time. Yes, I remember all of you.
You were my divine. You were my timeless moment. You were all my moments as we danced with our hearts in the timeless moment.
You’ve flown away now, like so many other moments that came and danced with me.
But I shall carry you forever in my heart, like you wanted me to when you came to me to be claimed.
(In that game of hide and seek where I found you and you found me.)
You checked out of some muddy hotel and left me behind. Yes, that’s what you did.
How can I forgive you for that?
Oh, but how can I not?
Love is a strange yearning I think; it plays on no string I can tune, and yet it comes to me to be played.
I wanted to hold on to you, but you were gone, long before you came to me. I was never there for you, except as those arms reaching out to you as you let them go.
Yes, I’ll always remember you, as that girl that came up to me on the dance floor, and said: dance with me…
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OMG this is beautiful. at first i did not know what to expect, but once I started reading it - blew me away! Cheers and thanks for sharing!
You are most welcome, thanks...
This is one of my absolute favorites of yours! The story is rich and deeply felt, open to literal or metaphorical interpretation. The woman is time, the woman is timeless... Thank you for your beautiful words.
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Wow, it's that good...thank you...
Thank you for sharing on of your memories with us. This is beautiful at the same time brings forth some element of sadness as I read, yet it also shows a memorable memories. Hope I read it correctly because my English has not reached your level. =) yes, heartfelt is the word.
Your English is fine. It's basically a memory of me dancing with a girl who knew she was going to die and and chose me as her dancing partner...
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Wow, thanks...
Goodmorning Wales I wish I could dance like that 💃
Yeah, me too
I had the sense that your writing was based on something that had happened in your life @wales. Such an honour that this young girl/woman wished to dance and connect with you ~ No matter how briefly. ♥︎♥︎⚖️♥︎♥︎
It was a rare moment in my life that's for sure
The memories of long ago..this brought back some for me. They don't ever leave us do they? Nice write @wales
Thanks; no they don't leave us
This is so beautiful @wales, what a wonderful post to wake up too.
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Thanks; I wanted to do a good poem of this special time, and it seems to have turned out okay
Yearning, heartfelt over years for a love you once knew.
Brief encounters that make everything in life worthwhile living, love how you have embraced this as your own precious moments in time.
And some turn out bittersweet, and some turn out tender
Whether bittersweet or tender, memories are what we carry with us each day. Life!
Beautiful and so evocative of nostalgia for cherished memories. Really nice!
Thanks. It actually happened. She was a young girl who didn't have long to live; she said it was cancer. And so she was living her last days for all they were worth, for there wouldn't be many of them. She was early twenties, incredibly beautiful, and chose to dance some of her precious life with me...