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RE: My #FreeWrite entry into the Power House Creatives Contest - ISWMLES Blue & Round
This could have gone so many ways!!! What a sweet finish. But I am not sure I would have taken him back. there is a hint that there was violence in the past - and that it took him forever to make his way back to her...
There might also be a hint that the violence that took him away (think, "tightness in his chest") from her is the reason he was coming back to her, just as her "candle" was flickering out... 😉