Wanting you to go back and fill in all the spaces ... so much is unwritten and unspoken.

But you managed to draw me to the end and to wondering what will become of her. But even more, who is she and what brought her to this place?

LOTS of scribbling and structuring and embellishing in your future! But well done you for creating a character that the reader cares enough about to want to know more.

Sending you appreciation and encouragement from Northern Thailand.