Hey Raph, bonjour!
Welcome aboard the Steemit Train!!! If you want to have more upvotes, you need to share much more than a few lines... Meanwhile, you also need to make sure you write with as high a quality of writing as you can, without mistakes as much as possible! Of course, if you choose interesting pictures you found on the net to make your post more interesting, make sure you let us know where the pictures are from, this is VERY important. If you took the pictures or videos, let us know as well, so you get credited for your "work" among us too... ;)

This is great to see you have decided to "write" in a bilingual format, this will attract more people following your progress and evolution among us. Excellent choice!

Namaste :)