SPU Poetry Contest #7: In The Waves of Unity
As I stand here to breathe in
my ancestor’s traces
their thoughts on purpose
dreams lost and grown into known realities
I find myself in this bliss of:
Cosmic murmurs, reconciliation
in nebulas of thoughts
we are one, united
in the shorefronts of
vast and unknown eternities.
Eternity
is upon us
and we are all
a great part of these glowing tides
we call home.
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Enjoyed how you connect this deep philosophical understanding of universal oneness with something mundane like standing on a beach.
Thank you, really appreciated comment! Really nice that you read it that way!!
Nice poem Vuds, I love the way it ends and I like how you go from I to We, underlining your sense of unity.
Thank you, really nice that you noticed! :-D
Nice poem with a good rhythm to it. The image is great, but is a Shutterstock stock image though. :-(
It is??? Oh my thank you for telling. I downloaded it from pixabay, so then it must have been illegal? I'll remove it right away and switch it.
This image is also on Shutterstock, but I think I may have discovered someone taking images from Pixabay to submit to Shutterstock in this case, and not vice versa! LOL!
Do you know how to use https://tineye.com/? Judst drag and drop an image you wish to use to double check that it is not also listed on a stock site. Keeping clear of those that are both on a stock site and on Pixabay could save you headaches down the road without knowing which is legit. :-)
Love this. Makes me think of stardust and how we are all made of it.
Thank you! Really appreciated! And I love that you think of that - it was my intention exactly!