You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: SPU Poetry Contest #3: Half-Hearted
I'm competing with you on the same prompt, but I must say, what a line:
For want of an ocean
In which to swim
My better half:
A phantom limb.
I'm competing with you on the same prompt, but I must say, what a line:
For want of an ocean
In which to swim
My better half:
A phantom limb.
Thank you @pragmaticpassion! Just read your entry, beautiful work :) The all-too-familiar experience of confusion, mixed messages, and conflicted emotions in personal relationships, deftly and powerfully sketched. I love your minimalist style: each phrase says just enough to convey everything about everything that matters.