Poetry Dice Challenge 3000 / Entry#1: What we loststeemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetrydice7 years ago (edited)

Deep is the dream
which embraces justice
while many are the fishes
in the sea of ​​injustice

The trees reflect goodness
but their fruit is rotten
the water is no longer pure
drinking is worthless
misery have locked
the light of kindness

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very great poem

This is a stellar entry!! Thanks for joining us this week! :-)

Thank you! is a pleasure

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You post some interesting stuff. I'm not into poetry but ....following.

I loved the contrast in the two sentences below:
The trees reflect goodness
but their fruit is rotten

Beautifully written. Do check out my entry.

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