SteemitPoetryContest #16 -Lake
I wrote this poem for a poetry contest held by @terrycraff titled Steemit Poetry Contest #16 + winners of # 15 !
I imagine the beauty of a lake.
foto danau Universitas Indonesia oleh @willyana
LAKE
The lake's ripples
Like a goose's wingspan
Shed his fine feathers on the water Forming rainbow lines
The twilight dimmed
With lotus-budding lotuses
The leaves are still
boisterous at the top
Like the seagulls that start
all over
And the fish's eyes were
glazed
Like a longing tree
Depok, Februari 2018
@willyana
Help me, I can't swim
Puisimu boleh juga, Willyana. Lanjut
Terima kasih Pak Ahmadun. Salam.
Gimana cara ikut kontes ini ya
Hahaha... Ok, i am coming
Asyik. Danau adalah kehidupan. Semoga bergenbira. Jangan lupa copy link dan paste di bagian komentar berita tentang kontes in
Iya bang untuk refresh bagus. Sudah bang. Terima kasih uda mengingatkan. Salam.
Sudah lama aku gak ke danau UI ini....
Yaa... Bang Iman selalu ketinggalan deh, mainlah kan dekat lokasinya. Dijamin asyik. Hehehehe
Lalu apa yang kata-kata harus jelaskan kepada semua pemilik kata bahwa kata-kata ini sangat bermakna
Terima kasih andrian.
Puisi selalu bisa menjelaskan banyak hal termasuk kerinduan yang begitu absurd, dijelaskan lewat kata-kata indah seperti puisi ini. Good lucky!
Yup. Maka dari itu berpuisilah bang Pilo. Thank you very much.
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STOPAwesome, hope you succed with the contest!
Amen. Thank you very much bang @bagindooo
Mantap. Maju terus kawan-kawan
👍🏽
Terima kasih bang Iwank. Siap!
Semangat !!!!
Semoga menang ya kak. Semoga puisi bikinan kakak ini menyentuh hati para juri dan mendapatkan juara umum mengalahkan semua peserta. Amiiiin...
Amin ya Robb. Terima kasih doanya ya @citrarahman. Salam.