Appreciation of @ajremy poertry contest

in #poetryappreciation6 years ago (edited)

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A formation of skin
Walking endlessly to find itself
Along shores and quiet roads
Carrying heart with a heavy soul

. The first paragraph talks about a being, trying so hard to discover it's purpose, it walks along the shores and quiet roads, but it's soul still knows there's something missing.

With nothing to feel
Living a life surreal
No turning points;
Nor twisting roads

. The second paragraph starts by explaining the being's feeling of emptiness inside, living a life that's twisted and strange, it can't go back and it can't cross roads.

Silence fills the mind
Realization come to bind
Everything is but;
An emptiness inside

. Silence is all he feels, the reality of life then presents itself, this is the reality that all there is, is emptiness inside. 0516a180bcaa7594706124a8d2b63a49f29485.jpg

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