Appreciating the poem EMPTINESS by @bloggoderps

A formation of skin
Walking endlessly to find itself
Along shores and quiet roads
Carrying heart with a heavy soul

With nothing to feel
Living a life surreal
No turning points;
Nor twisting roads

Silence fills the mind
Realization come to bind
Everything is but;
An emptiness inside

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The poem above is so articulate, that it clearly expresses the word EMPTINESS which also means VACANT, which is well understood.
Looking at what the poem is centered at, my point of view, the poem depicts something devoid of contents, something that contains nothing, a place that contains nobody. Their was no use of vulgar language because at some point frustration , loneliness was setting in for the poet..

One of the best poem I have come across that defines loneliness in a detailed way.

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Nice poem, great lines and good choice of words. Yes, it speaks also of stagnancy.

Yes... thanks

Thanks for the entry @deronke

You are welcome

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