Twilight falls asleep - Original poem - haikusaturday -Round 7 - @prydefoltz
Being accurate, we talk about" blackberries "or" jion "as units to measure the duration of life Phonological segments, but are often replaced by syllables when haikus are translated or written in other languages.The poetics of haiku is generally based on the astonishment and emotion that the poet produces in the contemplation of nature.
Particularly, I had never dared to create haikus, I consider it a complex art, but due to my enthusiasm with the proposal of my friend @prydefoltz to congregate us in #poetryweekend: Fridays, Saturdays and Sundays, to share our poetry, I'm here. Saturdays are for haiku and i had not participated so far, so I premiere today with this composition as a rookie waiting for the teacher to correct me if I commit any slip.
The twilight falls asleep
I stumble sunset
the golden yellow petals
they fall in flakes
the citric tone
portrays a fumarole
get up the wave
Violets are slow
soggy marshmallow clouds.
Faints heaven
The sun is blinking
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
June 30, 2018
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
the golden yellow petals
they fall in flakes
the citric tone
portrays a fumarole
get up the wave
Violets are slow
soggy marshmallow clouds.
Faints heaven
The sun is blinking
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
June 30, 2018
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
portrays a fumarole
get up the wave
Violets are slow
soggy marshmallow clouds.
Faints heaven
The sun is blinking
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
June 30, 2018
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
soggy marshmallow clouds.
Faints heaven
The sun is blinking
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
June 30, 2018
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
June 30, 2018
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
The photographic captures are my own, taken with my huawei p7, some improved with editing.
Thanks to @d-pend for creating a space like #steemitschoolpoetry to grow and share our poetry. As well to @prydefoltz for hosting us on weekends with #poetryweekend.
Join the #steemschools
Discord here
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Especially, to my invaluable friend, @onthewayout .
Very beautiful photos of the crecúspulo. Very good haiku
Oooooh... Thank you! Do you think they are good haikus? I took great care!
Love the metaphor work, Zeleira:) This one was my fave:)
Thank you dear friend! Good thing you like I tried hard to please you, haiku teacher. I feel more than rewarded.
Wow the photos are very beautiful
Oh thanks @luckyspark. Remember that you must also comment on the poem outside, it is important. Practice and always return to saturday haiku of @prydefoltz.
I love the imagery you create as the tired sun, blinks...
...and as the 'eyelashes' ruins by this blinking
Thank you! I appreciate your comment very much.
You're most welcome!
are you sure you're not the teacher, @zeleiracordero?? ;) Awesome photos and haikus my friend. I've got some practicing to do =D
Oh my God! Thank you, @karmashine! :)
The metaphor is genius, @zeleiracordero :) Gorgeous images.