The wind, the scream - Original Poem

in #poetry • 6 years ago
Loneliness is a topic that has many layers, one on top of the other. The scabs are removed and never heal. On the contrary, new ways of distracting it appear, making it deeper. We see how we are more alone with so much company, how we create more personal spaces for the deaf. We become more and more anonymous ... more layers, more masks. Yes, we see, yes we believe, yes, we share it or at least we try; but, every day there is more emptiness. There is something of this in the poem that I present to you today. As always, waiting for your kind look and that you like it.

The musical theme that I connect with this creation, between the lines, is: Damien Rice | It's Takes A Lot To Know A Man

"If the doors of perception were purified, everything would appear to men, as it really is: infinite, for man has closed himself in until he sees all things through the narrow slits of his cave""

William Blake

The wind, the scream

The loneliness of the wind
          it is a lament inside a grotto

The wind howls,
the wind psychophonizes,
the wind overwhelms.

Why?

We are strong isolates

The face looks
          But in?

Who knows what's inside?

Only the wind

Closer to minds,
farther from the bodies,
closer to the noises,
farther, silence;
more alone, just
the only thing is the wind,
in.

There is nothing in the scream.
The vacuum hides it.
It's a naked silence
so,
background,
of clothes.

We are using wind,
          deaf and silent

Alone

Moving away from the world,
          screaming inside.

Original poem by @zeleiracordero


Source of images:

1-Ear of the wind
2-Alone
3-Trapped in life

June 22, 2018

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     6 years ago 

    I enjoyed reading the lonely and whispering howl of your winds.

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       6 years ago 

      Closer to minds,
      farther from the bodies,
      closer to the noises,
      farther, silence;
      more alone, just
      the only thing is the wind,
      in.

      I really have to attend the poetry class to understand the deeper meanings

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         6 years ago 

        Thanks for reading and commenting, @sayee.

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           6 years ago 

          Thanks you for sharing your poem and heart :)

          Can anyone hear the screams of a voice held inside a glass jar?

          Who knows by the wind...

          A voice carries a message and then dissapears

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             6 years ago 

            Thank you for commenting on your impressions, my dear friend!

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               6 years ago (edited)

              I'm always surprised at the intensity of your lyrics, @zeleiracordero:

              Moving away from the world,
              screaming inside.

              Definitile, only the wind would know. Fortunately, some people come to our lives like made of wind; they get in and make of our world a fresher place to be.

              Thanks for sharing ♥

              (I'm coming back to upvote)

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                 6 years ago 

                Thank you, dear Marlyn! You yourself are one of those people "made of wind" that refreshes the space that touches.

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                   6 years ago 

                  You're too kind, @zeleiracordero ♥ Your words come from the wind for sure ☻ I'll work to deserve them.

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                     6 years ago 

                    The loneliness of the wind
                    it is a lament inside a grotto

                    As usual, amazing imagery! What are you smoking in Venezuela?

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                       6 years ago 

                      Ha ha ha... very funny!

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