Only stars on the way - Sólo estrellas por camino- 100 days of Poetry - Day 90
My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Grace Vanderwaal -light the sky
"Change your thoughts and you will change your world"
Only stars on the way
It is so ephemeral that moment when it rubs
the magic of a torment with the calm of a color
and yet, we concentrate on the flower
of a sun dying, hiding his pain
in a star.
Nailing our mistakes to the sky
it is a crime that does not prescribe,
it's a hell with glory costume
bringing us back a monster
with long teeth.
The human game activated with a compass
disjointed, only road stars.
You got lost?
Get back to look for you!
There are thousands of eyes
inside our darkness.
Life is there, do not stay.
Take my hand, I go to your side.
It is almost cruel to repeat and repeat
the same songs, the same verses,
the same prayers. He knows he's in heaven,
you do not say anything new.
That you just want to dream?
Then, enjoy your dream!
¡I am going on a trip!
"Cambia tus pensamientos y cambiarás tu mundo"
Sólo estrellas por camino
lo mágico de un tormento con la calma de un color
y, sin embargo, nos concentramos en la flor
de un sol muriendo, escondiendo su dolor
en una estrella.
es un crimen que no prescribe,
es un infierno con disfraz de gloria
trayéndonos de regreso un monstruo
con largos dientes.
desarticulada. Sólo estrellas por camino.
¿Te perdiste?
¡Devuélvete a buscarte!
Hay miles de ojos
dentro de nuestras tinieblas.
La vida está allá, no te quedes.
Toma mi mano, yo voy a tu lado.
las mismas canciones, los mismos versos,
las mismas oraciones. Él sabe que está en el cielo,
no le dices nada nuevo.
¡Entonces, disfruta tu sueño!
¡Yo voy a emprender un viaje!
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: III
Source of images:
3-Neuroscience
2-Beginning of a beginning
3-Sky of stars
4-Road in the sky
5-At the end of the tunnel
June 05 , 2018
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
If you have not yet joined the #steemitschool Discord, do it now:Discord
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
Source of images:
3-Neuroscience
2-Beginning of a beginning
3-Sky of stars
4-Road in the sky
5-At the end of the tunnel
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
If you have not yet joined the #steemitschool Discord, do it now:Discord
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
For me I see the frustration of dealing with conservative or orthodoxy Christianity lost in the same old traditions and holding on to a dream of the future without understanding how to get there or ever really taking the time to exlore themselves and see the darkness they live in.
I’m with you. Let’s go on a trip.
Thanks for the visit, dear @firststeps and thank you for that assertive comment and support on this trip.
Ready for a trip lets back our bags and go:)
well said
Likewise! Thanks for visiting me, I appreciate it, @dmilliz.
Stars (also flowers) as the ‘paint-by-numbers’ poetry toolkit, always mesmerize poets for centuries. The poet suggests, an individual must only choose “something” like a star, not necessarily the star itself.
Good job, @zeleiracordero amiga
This poem is my weekly find