Dancing with the river - Danza en el río - Challenge of 100 days of Poetry - Day 79

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)
Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry. We are on day 79, heading for 100. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the challenge of 100 days of Poetry summoned by #steemitschool and @d-pend. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.

My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is:Jorge Drexler - Al otro lado del río


"Life should not be a trip to the grave with the intention of arriving safely with a beautiful and well-preserved body, but rather come skidding sideways, among a cloud of smoke, completely worn and shattered,
Proclaiming loudly: Ugh! What a trip!"

Hunter S. Thompson.



Dancing with the river


Life is a dance with the river in a raft.
     winds and rapids, slow and deep waters.
lights on the road.
               The changes of steps that are experienced
     affects the way you dance

Dancing with the river helps to know,
            remember old steps
      of other dances with him,
                  to take the pulse of the oar.
            to unite it with the rhythm.

Trust the couple,
            will prevent dizziness, falls
and even stones in the shoe.
                                 We can gain value and vision
            when you dance in turbulent waters.

The other dance couples,
      although they dance differently,
               They accompany us on the flight to the water level,
they help us face the rapids,
                  and get the best of one by simply dancing side by side.

        You have to put your heart in the dance.
We can rest on our shore.
                      Of course, this tires us.
However, to finish
                      the dance we must reach the end,
            with strength and enthusiasm and
maybe, we should even ask:
               Did we learn?



Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes. Estamos en el día 79, en dirección a 100. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el desafío de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.

"La vida no debería ser un viaje a la tumba con la intención de llegar a salvo con un cuerpo hermoso y bien conservado, sino más bien llegar derrapando de lado, entre una nube de humo, completamente desgastado y destrozado, proclamando en voz alta: ¡Uf! ¡Vaya viajecito!"

Hunter S. Thompson.


cita


Danza en el río


    La vida es una danza con el río en una balsa.
                  virajes y rápidos, aguas lentas y profundas,
        luces en el camino.
     Los cambios de paso que se experimentan
                       afectan el modo del baile.

                     Bailar con el río ayuda a conocerlo
       a recordar viejos pasos
                de otros bailes con él,
                     a tomarle el pulso al remo,
                        para unirlo con el ritmo.

           Confía en la pareja,
                              evitará mareos, caídas
       e incluso, piedras en el zapato.
                     Se puede ganar valor y perspicacia,
       cuando bailas en aguas turbulentas.

                     Las otras parejas de baile,
                 aunque bailen diferente,
       nos acompañan en el vuelo a ras del agua,
                  ayudan a enfrentarse a los rápidos,
       y sacan lo mejor de uno con sólo bailar codo a codo.

                             Hay que poner el corazón en la danza.
   Podemos descansar en nuestra orilla.
                   ¡Claro que esto cansa!
         Pero, para terminar
  el baile debemos llegar hasta el final
                         con fuerza y entusiasmo y
tal vez, hasta preguntarnos:
         ¿Aprendimos?


Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: III


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May 25 , 2018


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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS

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All experience brings learning. Reaching the end is a challenge, it is satisfying, it brings joy.

True, that is the essence of the message. Life is always "pa`llá".

La vida es un eterno aprendizaje, me encanta la comparación de la vida con la del viaje por el río, superando escollos y aprendiendo a sostenerse para no ahogarse. Genia como siempre, aquí seguimos y falta menos

¡Gracias, Mary!

Nice ! journeys through the streams of life.
Also reminds me that we only have a few days left in this challenge that we have been encouraging each other in. Reminds me to go hard till the end:)

Good interpretation, as always, poet!

Beautiful, reminds me of Nobel Prize Winner 'Siddhartha' by Hermann Hesse.

Muchas Gracias, @zeleiracordero amiga

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