POETS (PARA PENYAIR) // (A Bilingual Poem)

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POETS

In front of the Ocean
we are just small scallops
who can only comb the sand
on the edge
on the coast
shaken by the tidal waves
worried about the arrival of the newcomers.

And we try to avoid:
in the coral reef
in our dull shells
we condemn the roars of the sea
hoping, the tides will not drag us out.

But we can’t:
the tidal waves finally hit the rocks
threw us out
dragging us into the middle the Ocean
while the nudges of the newcomers
often crush our shells

(Original Poem -- © @zaimrofiqi)

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###BAHASA INDONESIA###

PARA PENYAIR

Di hadapan Samudera
kita hanya secuil lokan kecil
yang cuma bisa menyisir pasir
di pinggir
di pesisir
oleng oleh sapuan gelombang pasang
cemas akan jamah orang-orang pendatang.

Dan kita coba menghindar:
di ceruk karang
dalam cangkang kusam
kita kutuki gemuruh Lautan
sambil berharap, pasang tak akan menyeret kita ke luar.

Namun kita tak bisa:
pasang toh akhirnya menghantam karang
menghempaskan kita ke luar
menyeret kita ke tengah lautan
sementara jamah orang-orang pendatang
seringkali meremukkan cangkang.

(Original Poem -- © @zaimrofiqi)

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Since I have huge respect to the Ocean :) and always have been a bit scared of it . I think you have captured my feeling so nice that I can't even say it with my words better. Awesome Poem man Even that is on two languages. Does this poem by any chance rhyme in Indonesian ?

Thank you very much, dear friend @angelveselinov...
Yes it is rhyme in most parts...but i felt a bit difficult to maintain the rhyme in English...😀

Have a great day...☕❤

very brilliant and lively words! i love how you managed to find the right words for poets like us. looking forward to read more of your art in the future as your follower :D

Thank you, friend...
I am glad you like my poems...
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Salam sukses selalu...

Nice poetry @zaimrofiqi
I like your poetry
Great work

I am glad if you like it, dear @gumegxgolgom...

Have a great day...😀☕❤

This poem speaks monuments. The imagery and the words spoke to me. It was as if I could feel what you were feeling.

You are a 100% right, dear @jennifer78...
How do you know what I felt? 😀☕❤
Ah... thanks so much dear...

Have a lovely day...😀☕❤

Ruarrr biasaaaa

Hehee... Makasih Mbak @elfinarachmi...

Salam sukses...☕❤


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Thank you very much dear @vuds & @poetsunited...
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This poem reminds me to be mindful today. Life is fragile and everything we do has an effect that we can never predict.

Thank you my friend, @trumanity...
Glad you like it...☕❤

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