Searching for the Smiling Boy in the Mirror (Day 20)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Forty is the old age of youth; fifty the youth of old age. —Victor Hugo

Every man over forty is responsible for his face. —Abraham Lincoln

In the middle of life it happens that death comes/ and takes your measurements. This Visit/ is forgotten and life goes on. But the suit is/ sewn in the silence.
—Tomas Transtromer

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Growing Older

Youth is passing, he said
with a deathless smile
voice lilting
head tilting

It’s tucked like a secret
in the folds of our flesh
it’s written in the open
of our shifting features

Perhaps, not in complete sentences, yet
a halting line, here
a faltering fragment, there
telling punctuation marks...

Once, our blood sufficed as the choice stimulant
hurtling through our veins, singing indestructibility
now, we must supplement it to ward off sleep
—the shallow and the Deep.

© Yahia Lababidi


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Good one..! 👌

ur poems are quite meaningful..!
Been a fan of ur writing since days..!!!

Keep the good work going..! 💪

Stay blessed..! 😇
~ Tennis Girl 🎾🎾

Thank you, Christinaa, for your loyalty--it's good to be heard :)

pleasure..! :)

I am sure this young boy is Yahia ;)

Loved these lines of yours my friend ;)

Youth is passing, he said
with a deathless smile
voice lilting
head tilting

By the way i also liked the saying of Abraham,

Every man over forty is responsible for his face. —Abraham Lincoln

Yes, good guess ;) Thanks, for reading, Salman.

Hello @yahialababidi, we are reluctant to realize that we are changing. The mirror is an accomplice, it always seems the same. We wake up from the dream when strange people call us LORD. In our mind we have not arrived there. Greetings.

Interesting reflection, @corderosiete, what do you mean by this:

We wake up from the dream when strange people call us LORD.

(Do you mean, dying, and return to the Light?)

I mean that in our mind we do not get old. We look the same, even without wrinkles that we detect in the mirror. In my country is synonymous with "Lord" someone older.
Good is what I understood from your poem. The wonderful thing about this world of poetry is that each of us identifies with the verse and appropriates it.

Oh, I see! By Lord I thought you meant G_d :) Thanks, again, for your thoughtful comments. Yes, a poem has a life of its own and speaks, differently, to readers. _/|\_

That last line there is genius ! Really on point

Accepting aging can be hard! Interesting topic you chose dude!

Grateful to be heard, and so enthusiastically 🤓

Yes, aging is not for wimps—not easy trying to relinquish, gracefully, the gifts of youth... one at a time...

(Speaking of sleep, it’s past my bedtime. Good I got that siesta :)

Here’s an earlier meditation on getting older you might also enjoy:

Being 44 is Like 4:30 in the Afternoon

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very nice post

O amazing my dear @yahialababidi 👌👌👌👌
great effort for us .we love you dear @yahialababidi

appreciable work @yahialababidi

Beautiful poem dedicated to our redeemer. Who gave his life in the sign of the cross for the sins of others.

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