Steemit Poetry Contest #12 - Waiting Shed
Waiting Shed
Sitting in this chair, I wait
Cars passing by, I hear
To every direction they steer
Headed to a destination somewhere
People passing by, I see
Others merely sit, yet seems so busy
Others talking on the phone
Laughing out loud even they're alone
To wait is a challenge
But oh what joy the heart would feel
When the future is here, I can see it so clear.
Now, the waiting is finally over the smile is real.
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This is my entry to @terrycraft's #poetrycontest with the theme Future. Find it HERE.
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Nice to read your poetry, while I listen to the music..
thanks to you.
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Ironic... in the "communication" time is when people is more isolated and alone as you describe and the "busy" concept is used for covering it, if your mind think is busy it hasnt time to stop.and think about the lacks and wich emptiness time is really nowadays.
Thanks for sharing your text.
thanks for dropping by. ^^,
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This is pretty nice. It paints a vivid picture of sitting and waiting for something on a busy street.
You might want to watch your grammar a bit though, theres a few little mistakes. :)
Doesn't take away from "the feel" of the poem though.
well done :)