Poem / That won't break me
That won't break me
That won't break me
My hides thick like a tree
I'm stronger than you think
I'm hard tungsten, not malleable zinc
That won't break me
Your stings are insignificant like bees
That razor sharp tongue of yours
Has no effect, might as well shut your jaws
That won't break me
You are as insignificant as a flee
You are a minor inconvenience
But you have no power, no influence
That won't break me
You will never get me on my knees
You will never have the power
To take over me not even in my darkest hour
I'm indestructible, there's no use
Stop. Think for a while over your self abuse
By Ethan
2017/06/30
Wow to this really famous unbreakable item. :D
Well your poetry is so nice. It's written in such a lucid manner but it does not fail to bring out the emotion that you want it to convey. Really a very good poem. It deserves all the upvotes that have come it's way.
PS: the other unbreakable item is also very adorable. :D
:D Nokia my love, my one and only ♥
Hahahahahhaa :D
I see your love is so strong and is never going to hurt you and even get hurt himself. :D
I just hope your love story is everlasting, I mean your love is everlasting and you enjoy each other's company a lot. Keep spreading love and keep loving your only love. ;)
Thank you I shall continue :)
Great
This poem is a perfect motivation for me, 7 years ago due to an accident my spinal cord got damaged and i am unable to walk since then, and life is very hard for me in a third world country, and every day i tell myself in my own language that this disability won't break me, so thank you for these nice words @xxsenpaixsamaxx
I'm glad I was able to help :)
Oh my goodness I love the unbreakable item!!! I used to have one of those those, I would literally throw it I the ground to prove that's it was invinsible!!! Then one day I did that, and it broke for good!
:D I love Nokia's
@xxsenpaixsamaxx I enjoyed reading your poem!
it takes courage to rhyme, like a poet divine read these words best believe i'm going to shine, now the bottom line is this..I followed you now reciprocate it and stay in bliss!
Thank you :)
Inspiring to read this after a tough day of dealing with things that want to break me. Keep writing:)
Thank you, may your will to persevere burn bright.
I love this line!
That won't break me
You will never get me on my knees
You will never have the power
To take over me not even in my darkest our
But you might wanna change the "our" to "hour" ?
Just thought that you might have meant that. Thanks for sharing. Kinda needed it, that season of life :) Cheers!!
#follow4follow
Thank you :) I will correct it :)
What a cryptic poem, I really enjoyed the read, sadly I am the opposite of this. Everything breaks me, people stairs, people words, peoples body language. I guess that why I am who I am.
You will one day find the strength, In believing in yourself you will become what you need to be!
Inspirational poem there. Following you now
Thank you!
amazing poem loved it
*no power (you wrote now power)
Love it, keep 'em coming, upvoted!
Thank you, I apologize