Poem / Last Night
Last night
To be honest at this very moment
I have no idea how to make a poem
It feels like it's just left me
The feelings I can no longer see
I'm still writing because I love it
I finished an anime last night
That made my mental state plummet
It shattered me and made me realize
I'm all alone
It's was 2 am in the morning
Where a normal guy would out be partying or sleeping
While I was in front of the monitor binging.
It was a disturbance to my soul
That gave me a shocking wake up call
All I do nowadays is wake up, eat
Then off to the computer screen.
I've become so comfortable being a shut in
But I'm missing what I could rather be doing
I've lost my appetite for social interaction
But last night was like a allergic reaction
My throat closed up
It felt like I couldn't breath
My eyes were burning
I could barely see
An overwhelming feeling grows within
That I'm done with this I need to try again
I should actively seek what my heart desires
Even if it leaves me bruised, broken and uninspired
I can't stay the way I am forever
It's not right
The change I need to make
I realized last night...
By Ethan
2017/07/03
I feel as tho after last night my brain's been under constant siege
My hearts been slapping the crap out of every thought I've had and it sucks.
Nice poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Awesome as always.upvoted 😊
Smugvoted, ~desu~
arigato Smug-chan
Love your poem... Keep on breaking night writing ;-)
Indeed XD
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My upvote isn't worth much but you have it :)
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Cool poem!
Great post
It's really a master piece of poetry coming right from someone who has suffered a lot. I think poetry has a unique vibe which attracts others to it. I am into poetry for sometime. I have read and write many of good poems. But this one is really good.
Good luck for the future.
Thank you :)
I love it 😍 👍🏻