The Island, Episode 7 (Sudden Death)steemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetry7 years ago

The island is a rhyming adventure, where YOU choose what happens next! Simply read the episode, and then post what you think should come next as a comment. The comment that gets the most votes will become part of the story. Catch up on previous episodes by visiting #TheIsland

All suggestions will be put into a random number generator. One will be chosen as fatal. More suggestions mean more chances of survival.

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Previously
The chest has floated really far...
Dry land should be your guiding star.

Episode 6
You wade to shore with weary feet
Your throat is dry, you need to eat
The dead man sways in the gentle breeze
Ahead, you see a few green trees.

There is a rock pool, yards away
There could be crab, or shrimp, or cray
You must move fast, your body's weak...

Write your final line suggestion in the comments, and then vote for your favourite suggestion. You might want to check back in for new suggestions later - especially if you're the first to post! But beware... the story moves on every 24 hours. The comment with most votes will decide where the story goes next.

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Head for the trees, it's fruit you seek

Avoid the circle or your future is bleak

Nicely referenced. Into past episodes you did peek.

Looks like you decided the next path

The coin toss marked yours as the fatal suggestion. Luckily, you lost the coin toss to tie break which winning suggestion gets used

You must find food, it's time to eat, but perhaps it's best to get some sleep

but your future is so bleak.

You missed out this time. But the story lives on!

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