100 Days of Poetry / Day 12 - Of bee and the tree / O pčeli i stablu - Original poetry / art
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
Do you ever wonder, while consuming your time
as your home fades like a burned ink
In your velvet suit, while your scalp soaked with rain
paints the picture of our problems
Hiding anything that seems impossible
The dream of yours hurled into the wind
on which you are now fluttering, as if you knew the days that come
are not yours anymore
Flowers colored with gold shivers,
on the green carpet your home decreases
Lead by Ego, a little human wants to save you
but does not even understand that without it,
nature, as it is,
is his only drug.
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely</center
Dal' se nekad pitaš dok provodiš vrijeme
Kako dom ti blijedi kao zapaljena tinta
U svom baršunastom odijelu, dok ti pokisnulo tjeme
Oslikava sliku svijeta i ljudske probleme
Prekrivajuči išta što se čini nemogućim
Svoj san bačen u vjetar
na kojem sada plaho ploviš, kao da znaš da dani koji dolaze
Nisu više tvoji
Drhti cvijeće obojano zlatom,
dok na zelenom tepihu dom ti je sve manji
Egom vođem mali čovjek samo želi da te spasi
Al' ne shvaća ni sam da može i bez toga,
da je priroda, onakava kakva je,
jedina mu droga.
by
Mr. Spacely
Anyway, thank you all for stopping by. I will appreciate any feedback. Feel free to speak your mind, I'm open to all suggestions and critics, and I will take time to think about them seriously.
Once again, thanks for the support!
Thanks for using #artzone tag! Artzone can give just one upvote per day!
No problem brah :D
definitivno mi mnogo bolje lezi na "nasem" jeziku nego na engleskom.
kad prvo pisen na hrvatskon pa za prevest mi dođe loše :) malo po malo bit ce to sve bolje.. Iako iman novu taktiku sad, da prvo pisen na eng pa cemo vidit kako prevest haha al nije ni to lako :)
I wrote a story once about a bee, I'll have to dig it out, actually, as I don't think I have posted that one on Steemit, it was about what you could do to save a bee, if you found it still alive but struggling on the ground. Love bees, great poem.
@hopehuggs now you must post that poem, and tag me so I don't miss it! haha But really, I would like to read it... :D
Yes, bees are our little workers under the radar of our civilization. We must respect their home as well as the whole nature..
Thanks for the support! Much love, Luka.
beautiful and flowing poetry really nice
Thanks a lot, @tattoodjay ;)
You’re welcome
The bumble bee, nature's little powerhouse. I loved the ending, the line about nature being the only drug. Good poem, flowed well.
Thanks for stopping by @naquoya. Yes, bees are our little warriors, flowing around the trees making our life better :) It's on us humans to realize nature as our natural drug ;)
<3 :)
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dobar si :) epiteti su ti bas na pravom mestu i metafore ili personifikacije jako lepo upotrebljene. ja bih rekla da smo mi u velikoj prednosti u odnosu na pcele ali nasa upornost u odnosu na njihovu jedna velika nula. posto ih imam, mogu da kazem da kad te dugo znaju ne ujedaju, moras da naucis kako sa njima, i nije trula prica. jedva cekam neki odmor i lepo vreme i da uhvatim par lepih fotografija kosnica. :) tebi svaka cast za upornost i budi kao pcela! :)