100 Days of Poetry / Day 10 - I was floating / Lebdjeo sam - Original poetry / art
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
the Sun rose in my mind
Bright Sun, warm to the heart
like sleepy eyes of the child,
while glazing at her mother
Like the last kiss,
for a sailor from his girl
while the pain and fear grasp my wings
Does she again wants to belong to me, or
just wants to come by, explain with deeds,
that she has always been with me
but I never renounced you
It's the sight of freedom
that founded a new way,
and the heart moved on,
where it seems, eternal light awaits
I'm drowning in my depths
and with a loud whisper, you changed my mind
As if I was another being I spread my wings
I stopped dreaming fragile dreams,
and I rose up where time stops,
near the farthest proximity
while my heart is playing the ancient melodies,
until wings carried me into boundless heights...
but it's time to move on...
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
u moje misli, svanulo je sunce
sunce žarko, srcu toplo
Kao snene oči dijeteta,
dok svoju majku gleda
kao zadnji pozdrav i poljubac,
djevojke mornara
dok me grči gnjev i strah
Zar je opet ona željna da mi pripada, ili
samo želi prići, djelima objasnit'
da je uvijek tu i bila
al' odbacio te nikad nisam
Samo pogled slobode,
drugi put je naš'o,
a i srce krenulo je dalje,
gdje se pari vječno svijetlo.
da tonem u dubine...
i kao šapat glasni promijenila mi pogled
Kao da sam drugo biće, raširirim si krila,
stanem snivat krhke snove
te poletim gdje vrijeme stane,
u najdalje blizine
dok čujem srce kako svira melodije stare
dok me krila nose u vječne visine...
ali vrijeme je za ići dalje...
by
Mr. Spacely
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I can get lost in your poetry, that one is beautiful and mesmerizing.
It's so motivating to hear that! Really is... I am glad you can get lost and sail in my dreams on my little poetic ship... :)
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