Outside the Lines - Poetry
It's easy to color between the lines,
A stroke of gold, a splash of bright mosaic blue,
a hint of white,
Blood red crimson,
Or careless drip of emerald dew,
The palette spills a naked truth.
Each color burns uniquely you...
Forms an arc,
Of blended hues.
Linear lines may only hinder,
Braided ropes will tightly bind,
Spilling flesh into the middle
of a consecrated mind.
Tear them loose,
Release them all,
Scribble past the preset lines.
Seize each canvas
From obsurity
Hear their voices
Low and sweet
whispering a cool seduction
Kiss of new possibility.
Janelle Gregory
Art colored on Pen Up for Galaxy Note 8 edited in Deep Dream Generator
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really love this piece, the flow, the glitter, like a warm ocean if it could be a painting of spring.
Thank you for the beautiful comment… it sounds like it poem of its own!
Lovely and concise. It seemed to progress from tangible, visible colors to the invisible inner hues of possibilites, of imagination...
at least that was my interpretation. Thank you for sharing this piece Janelle :)
Thank you for the wonderful comment. I love to read your impressions.
That hit me like a truck. Great work miss you know how to tap into emotion very well. Keep up the awesome work!
<3 J. R.
Thank you for reading and for the insight. I'm glad it struck home.
I thought that line was powerful, as well :)
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beautiful butterfly and beautiful poem...
I'm very fond of butterflies, so when I saw this one in my book on Pen Up, I had to try it.
I created the poem around the image. If you haven't tried the dream generator yet, I highly recommend it. Thank you for stopping by!
wonderful poem on lines.
I'm glad that you stop by, and that it resonated with you.
great work! keep it up!
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