Freestyle Rap Poetic Verses #1: I'm No Perfectionist (Original Freestyle Poetry)
Writing up all these rhymes, from the mind, no repeat
It's 2:02PM, in Hamburg, Germany
Oops, that's my location, enemies will aim for hurting me
But I'm making changes everyday with upmost certainty
They call me @Verbal-D, these beats I still be murdering
But I also revive, bringing life through music surgery
A video for Steemit flowing my flaws like I'm senile
Yes, I can freestyle, but it's nowhere near my polished stuff
I'm writing this as quick as I can, 'til I feel it's all enough
But the thing that I don't speak on are the topics in the gutter
As long as it is positive, inspiring, I'll sputter
Mutter and mumble, stumbling something about a shutter
Don't need overthink it, then fail, and then want redemption
Some people want attention while creating too much tension
As many times I've fallen and failed, I've got like ten shins
Pertaining to the body, thoughts of childhood and scraping knees
Another reminder of how I'm no perfectionist
I hope you liked this freestyle, I'm done, it's time to reminisce
Time of Completion: A little over 10 minutes to write this one
Currently working on some music, barely have time to post so this is what you get for now :)
Maybe I'll do a video of my freestyling soon over a beat or two, but I prefer written material practiced and drafted always, but as a true emcee, I gotta show I can freestyle rap as quick as I can write
Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.
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Next Post coming tomorrow
My very own wonderful gif logo provided to me by the generous and kindhearted @papa-pepper Thanks again very much!
@verbal-d your words are wonderful -- never stop flowing -- the world is changing because we care to create.
You have great taste! @papa-pepper is an outstanding Steemitian :)
Thank you very much for your kind words @clevercreator, I cannot stop even if I wanted to, it's within me and I must share this gift I have. Steemit.com definitely provides even more incentive and inspiration to keep creating, and we truly do affect the world with what we put out.
Thanks again for your encouraging comment, @papa-pepper is a one of kind man with a big heart indeed
You are very welcome. I look forward to continuing to see your work.
Thank you, I post everyday. I look forward to some of your posts as well. I have followed you with my @peacemaker account
awww shucks. I will add that one too. feel free to send me a message in a reply if I miss your post
Thank you again, I shall not hesitate to do so lol only one post per day usually for both accounts of mine. Enjoy your day
I love the way you ended it, and I loved that trip and fall gif hahaha!!
Thank you very much my friend, some these gifs are just hilarious :)
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Thank you for the update
I watched that gif of that dude falling for like five minutes.
Welcome! I can't wait to hear more =]
Lol yeah sometimes I come across some hilarious gifs
Thanks for the warm welcome, I appreciate your kind words. More will be shown soon!
I bet this would really sound great if you recorded this. No beat and all. Just you, the microphone and a camera. Pure magic!
You have such quick mind, brother, and with your wide vocabulary, I'm sure you'll be a formidable opponent in Scrabble. Trust that I will be sharpening my edge to give you a worthwhile challenge :D
Yeah the beat was fresh tho, I wouldn't want t rap this freezers acapella in particular but I would if I had to but I would need to apply more cadence, emphasis, conviction and performance when the lines are this simplified
I am so ready for scrabble bro, start it on Facebook!
In a bit, in a bit haha! Once I get through these busy days, I would have enough time for scrabble :D I fully trust your process, so I know that you know best for how you output your work, brother!
Thanks bro, I look forward to that day, I am also busy and constantly catching up on everything I am falling behind on
nice i vote to you my dear
Thank you very much for the up vote, I appreciate your kind support.
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You comment this same comment to everyone else, try writing an actual response relevant to the post I have written, thanks. I am not much of a fan of robotic repetitive spammed comments. You will find more success on steemit if you are genuine and unique-original in your approach