HOPE - Poetry try 01

varunpinto (69)in #poetry • 7 years ago

Why am I submerged in a sea of sorrows,
When the world is a bed of roses for some?

Why am i standing in the queue of men,
When the hall of fame is adorned by a few??

But then, it's not me alone there standing,
For behind, there are a few more thousands waiting!

I do not know, whether it is like this that i can console,
A loser i may be now, yet a winner to be!!

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7 years ago in #poetry by varunpinto (69)

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chirayuwriter (44) 7 years ago

You nailed it, the way you expressed your thoughts is just beyond, great to see an Indian who is rocking with both photography and Writing really incredible following right now

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varunpinto (69) 7 years ago

Thanks :)

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donnab (49) 7 years ago

Thanks for sharing. Your common bond will help comfort others.

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varunpinto (69) 7 years ago

Hopefully :)

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deshwal (45) 7 years ago

nice picture sir upvoted your vote is very important for me sir @deshwal

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varunpinto (69) 7 years ago

sure :)

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taoufik (45) 7 years ago

I like your poem I courage you thanks for sharing with us

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varunpinto (69) 7 years ago

pleasure is mine :)

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etherealcreation (45) 7 years ago

Awesome !!! I read it thoroughly,I got drowned into it,
Its really a GREAT POST....enjoyed it.
Every time i see your posts i get delighted,they are just awesome,keep it up :) good luck and
dont forget to upvote back.