Betrayal poetry: Sadness in heart

in #poetry6 years ago



Thank you — your eyes they were always firm
when you look at me,
Those eyes that shined sedately
Now I realise they shined for revenge.

I was a sunflower everyday following those lights without realising it,
How could I have been so stupid?
Just the fact that we are not friends but someone else, my betrayal.
Breaks my heart.

You are not just anybody but my friend
It can't get any worse than this,
If your goal was not to bite and rip me,
You have already succeeded your revenge
by making making me rely on you completely.

I've raised a flag of truce to you,
during war they don't attack the one who raise a flag of truce and treat them nicely.
Since you can't wait.
I'll bring myself down from this position and leave
But give me some time....


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Nice one ....you made the post my kind of thing lately.

Thanks mate, I'm glad it meant something to you.

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