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RE: The Mute Poet
I think it is the combination of your glory I've seen ... maybe ditch the i've seen and do your slory alone or your glory seen ? As is the audience of one is OC the most important :)
I think it is the combination of your glory I've seen ... maybe ditch the i've seen and do your slory alone or your glory seen ? As is the audience of one is OC the most important :)
I'm trying to say I like it as is :P
I respect you'd have changed it, but I won't, because I think it conveys exactly what I want it to at that bit. Critique is not always received, y'know, because at the end of the day the poet has to make the call, based on their style and taste ;)
LOL yes kitteh ;)