This is damn good dude! Sometimes I feel like I compliment you too much and it gets a bit faked, but that's really not the case. I like this poem even more than the previous stories you have written. I'm bewildered, even though I have to read it a couple of times more to grasp the full meaning of this text I think. Somehow this is more tiresome to read than your big walls of text :D.
I am glad you liked it. I don't write these very often as I think sometimes I am more comfortable with the walls.
I understand. In walls of text you have more space to really convey your stance/viewpoint. That's why it's more comfortable to me at least. The more I write, the more certain I am that people will understand what I'm trying to say. Writing a poem is in that sense feel a bit restricting to me. It looks like you have no problem with that according to this poem :). I like the banal topic as well, the carousel.
By walls you mean the one that shield your thoughts? I know poetry can be more revealing as it dwells too well on our emotions.
It was a lovely poem sire. I loved the theme and I get the message. I hope and pray we don't fall though. I pray we ride on and on.