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RE: Simon Says "Pick Up Your Laundry"
Metaphors are cleverly placed into the reader's field of perception. I would almost say thrust there, achieved by such an economic selection of words, short lines .. The raven, cawing after, is a stark image and quite the persona for the speaker. I like the way the stanzas suggest some progression over time.
Thank you for your in depth reading. 😎