Afloat upon the scape of sea
And sky it pierces through,
A glassy fluid light against
Much darker grey and blue

This stanza really stood out to me for its great rhythm, flowed beautifully in my head.

I've always admired those who are able to write such good stanzas such as yours, and then continue on to create an excellent, lengthy piece!
Truly takes you on a journey!

Thank you for your words