I will agree that it is different but not you don't know what you are doing because I don't think any of us does. Every piece of poetry has its uniqueness but I think being used to my way of constructing stanzas is why I find other people's work so fascinating. And I mean people who don't follow the rules or what others do because I don't too.

To me, yours are solid. Packed with different moods but still punchy to the last word.