I REMEMBER HER (PART ONE)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

She was a happy girl.
Not that it was a happy childhood.
But
There were those moments.
She felt beautiful.
Despite being an average looking girl.

Her laughter resembled her mum’s.
So did a lot more of her.
Her facial features.
That strong and deep voice.
Her short temper.
And also her long thin fingers.

Everything.
Or almost everything.
She had no one else to compare herself with.
She never met her father.
And it was forbidden to ask.
She was her mother’s first born and that was the end.

Her happiness took a blow.
Her world was hit by an earthquake.
From a very painful transition of a lump to cancer.
Her mother was no more.
Death took away her favorite girl.

Grief consumed her soul.
Sadness creeped in her heart.
She cried.
But
Tears never dried.
Even after she got married.

She thought he was better than her cold relatives.
Till blows became his way of communication.
Her former classmates were away in high schools.
But here she was playing house while ducking knives.

She waited for him to change.
All she wanted was to be happy again.
She didn’t even care about his wage.
She was just tired of her pain.
Playing a grown woman wasn’t in sync with her age.

Stay Around For PART TWO :)

Thanks for stopping by, come again soon! Black Queen

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Your poetry is much better than mine ! haha

Aaaaawwww... You are too kind! :)

I love your poetry, but there is a lot of pain reflecting in it.

Pain is a huge contributor in our lives. We only need to keep its lessons :) Thank you so much for you read and thoughts!

wow nice poetry

Too kind. Thank you! :)

Raw! Like our conversations and my poetry, you share a lot. To me that is the heart of poetry. Words can say a lot with just a little or very little hidden under a lot depending on the authors mood. I look forward to more and continuing our conversation as well. Good Night Black Queen

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Thank you. I am grateful for your read and thoughts. Too raw maybe. Emotions won't let me do the second piece in peace! Soon.

<3 Black Queen.

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