Poem - Time
I cling to the emptiness of the final time,
very scared of what could happen,
and the words that I should speak flutter in my mind,
in an eternal silence along this road of the night,
and the hopes of this world that I must now take,
so that the time every second is slower,
and achieve being in our encounter place,
swimming in the vacuum without any pain,
dominating our time,
maybe you and me,
we could make our lives and point to heaven,
because nobody here can stop us,
simply until the end of our time.
By Leonardo Blanco (@tcpaikano)
time is like an inescapable cage that always gets ahead of us in every step we make. thus, i found your poem very adoring and spectacular. you put a wide smile in my face brother! more power to you and looking forward for more of your poem in the future!
This was such a lovely read. Time and time passing are hard concepts to grasp and explain with words, you did it really well. Kudos! Your flow of words here is very soothing and natural, easy to follow and get yourself lost in them.
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Lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing. @tcpaikano