Poem - Rejection
I looked at you without wanting,
And I saw that you intend to reject me,
Even if you think I like you,
You are in a wrong position,
You are a simple rejection,
That does not cause me any mental effect,
On the other hand,
You do not know how much laughter you give me,
Seeing you reject me without reason,
It's like burning with the breath,
And to fall into the absence of communication,
How to climb a mountain without a peak,
Like a sad end without a beginning,
Like the light of the moon reflected in each puddle,
People like you will always be in a vacuum,
And I will always be happy with my destiny.
Note: This poem can be extended.
By Leonardo Blanco(@tcpaikano)
Rejection hurts a lot. But we have to risk it at times. Beautiful poem
thanks you
This is an interesting piece. I do feel the rejection aspects but it kinda feels like the main character is in some form of denial, especially in the first and second stanzas:
"Even if you think I like you,
You are in a wrong position,
You are a simple rejection,
That does not cause me any mental effect"
And that's not a bad thing by the way. However, the last stanza was my favorite and i really liked its 1st and 2nd lines as well. Really nice poem.
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Good poem @tcpaikano. Life is full of rejection. Nonetheless we must not allow rejection to affect our life. Thanks for the wonderful poem and have a pleasant day.
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That's a good one @tcpaikano. Liked how you turned it around.
"You are a simple rejection"
"Like a sad end without a beginning."
Ha, ha. Confidence!
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The poem is Good, "the vacuum part" to me that killed it
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I like this part :
Like a sad end without a beginning,
Like the light of the moon reflected in each puddle,
People like you will always be in a vacuum,
And I will always be happy with my destiny.
Very good my friend. Regards @tcpaikano
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