Poem: What Is Important?

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

The world is such a large place
Why be concerned with saving face?
Only a Rat can win the rat race and
Though we all act as if first place can

Make up for the empty feeling
To win creates a loss and so I'm kneeling
Close to the ground, waiting for something
To spin me around, cause I'm done wanting

Needing or asking, pleading or grasping
Gasping for air as this feeling is passing
Me by so why do I feel like it's lasting?
What kind of question am I even asking?

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"Only a Rat can win the rat race"

Lol

That one got me

Good piece

I followed you

rat race -- proper words .

:(

;)

At least we can call it how we see it

~Stirling

A question that only you know the answer too!

So true!!!!

~Stirling

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