Shapes of Stillness (100 Days of Poetry Day #14)
Shapes
Symbols
Sounds
Swirls of sensory stimulation
See sun
Seeds sung
Sprouting spines
Sharing signs
Serendipity
Swimming side-by-side
With Source
Stillness
Seems so splendid
Simple
Simple
Stillness
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After reading this poem, I went on to watch a couple of your videos and listen to a podcast... I think I just spent over an hour binge watching you...haha.
I really enjoy leaning about the mind, anxiety, meditation and spirituality. Thanks!
I'm following you, to say the least...lol
Thank you! I really appreciate that @tressareid :)
I like your bold use of alliteration.
I am helping @d-pend in curration of poetry and was just moved into helping in the intermediate category, you'll see my feedback every couple days. Yesterday we had our class on critique. We're going to be doing these on Thursdays at 16:00 GMT. We are moving into a phase where the comments are going to be more geared toward critique so that we can all grow as writers. Feel free to come by and critique some of my poetry. It would be welcomed with open arms and is badly needed. But before I make an assumption that you are open to suggestions on your writing I want to just ask, "Are you open to suggestions on your writing?" Not that I think my suggestions should be taken by you, it's more that they can be used as a tool to open doors for future poems because it's a critical set of eyes that want to see you improve. I need those eyes too. We all do, but it's up to you. So let me know if I need to slow my role. Or if you are open to critique. 😎