(PDC3K) WK21 Entry: Weightless Thoughts
Does my face look worried from your perspective
my mind is on fire, its being, perceptive
Building's collapsing and overlapping
I'm over reacting , cracking , but inside I'm just napping
Falling as light as a cloud, onto a rainbow, into a rabbit hole
Not to sound dramatic, that's not the goal
I glance in your direction as time freezes
as if I was glancing at a floating turtle before it sneezes
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Very haiku like. I enjoy the short burst of emotion and word use. Cheers on a great little poem! Just right.
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amazing..
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