Raw Emotion Poetry A cappella (Original Song)
Every now and then when writing music I like to record an multi layered a cappella track to envision the track, and sometimes it just ends up being perfect as is with no need for an instrumental or production. This is a poem I had written I wanted to make into a song and the raw a cappella was so emotional I just had to keep it. Let me know what you guys think.
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Lyrics
Set down the lies
sit down in my eyes
shut down my holy shameundernieth the sky
outside what is time
rewind and watch againshes bitter with a burnt taste
just a sliver with a sad face
im tortured once againI cry like a woman
broke down in my skin
been plucked like a flower
to roots to begincall it holy
im a holy shame
im calling you father
passed on through your sinoh I weep like a woman
tossed out in the bin
faded like a petal
on the flower of himoh im just a woman
oh im just a woman
on the flower of himcall it holy
im a holy shame
I floated to the surface
then i drowned againoh im just a woman
and im crying within
passed down from the father
the love of your sinoh im just a woman
and im dying within
give me my heart back
so I can live again
Once I've heard it this way, I'm not sure I want to hear a different version. Know what I mean? To me, this is the song.
huge thanks my friend. I think you are right.. i cant see or hear it any other way now. just a pure emotion pour im glad to have captured it so pure