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RE: Corpse of the moments

in #poetry6 years ago

He asked me" if I missed him"? I didn't answer and walked away keeping my eyes closed and shedding tears. May be u and I were not meant to be together.
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He asked her if you miss him and she generously crushed his emotions under her feet. she slapped his dignity for how dare he could express his feelings in front of her.

His answer was "Corpse of the Moments" but in fact, it now turned "Morgue of the Desires" He now wanders in the "Corpses Of the Memories".

Ohh!!!
Thank god she left.God will punish her with the same brutality.

Who does watt? who cares? How smiles turned into quenching and grinning?

This statement signified her carelessness towards him.
(Ohh!!!
Thank god she left. God will punish her with the same brutality.) It reveals the zero importance of that boy. It reflects that he really never mattered to her. She was just playing around.

May God bless her. That boy does not want any punishment for anyone. Neither he wants to avenge his crusader. For that matter, she is not the first one to ditch him. He had his experiences though, none played the game. For that matter, she is not the first one to ditch him. He had his experiences though, none played the game. But again he questions "Thank god she left". This signifies the attitude, ego and gives a damn approach toward the corpses. She killed not only him but his soul and his belief and now she doesn't give a Damn!!!!

She was a forgiver, she didn't know how to give up on people.
Now she hates herself for being so possessive. she herself allowed him to make holes in her heart.
She hates herself for not being able to bear this pain.
Above all she hates him for letting her walk away as if he never knew her.
Why u and I met?

She is again thinking of herself only. He would have never walked away silently if she had not threatened him of her losing self-respect.

How could he tolerate that she was thinking low about herself just because of him? He walked away carrying intolerable pain. He is walking alone now though, deep inside, he wants to be called.

He had been pushed by her words,"Don't ever try to message me" How can he be the reason for her pain?

Yeh jazbaat hain. Iske liye dil mei mohabbat honi chahiye. Saamne nahi aana kisi ki majboori bhi to ho sakti hai naa. Ho sakta hai ki kisi ki nafrat honthon pe aane ka darr ho!

Ab yeh sitam har kisi ke naseeb mei bhi nai hota naa!
Mujhe mila hai, mai khush hoon.

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