Nicely penned. I like the way you told about the fear, which scares, discourages, weakens our thoughts and willpower in the whole poem. And then in the last stanza, you showed the other side of the fear. I like the way you did it.

And the last stanza I like it a lot. It is beautifully penned, I believe.

I'm waiting for your next work. I hope you'll something beautiful like this again.

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