HER (an original short poem)
She is the one I ever think of,
she is the one that makes me laugh;
she is the one that makes me breathe.
Without her I won't be here,
there is no point in my life
when I can't see her.
The life has frozen where she hasn't been,
the rose had opened where she passed it,
she is the one that lights my eyes with fire.
Where would I be without her?
Nice
congratulations beautiful poem thanks for sharing
Lucky girl. 'The her of the poem' thanks for sharing. Hope you check mine also about spider man 2 hehee
Great poem!
How lucky you are! You have true muse!) Such beautiful things appear by inspired heart only!
Thanks!
She is the love of your life.
Check out my poems too
nice.
Oh how I know this feeling you express in your poem all too well. Love is truly a beautiful gift and to share it with your special someone is a blessing all on its own. My favorite lines are The life has frozen where she hasn't been and the rose had opened where she passed it, truly a great poetic flow conveying how much vibrance, life, love and warmth this beautiful woman has to give to the world and the man who adores and ponders over her pricelessness. Upvoted easy
Thanks verbal for the kind words!
You're very welcome