"The battle of trees" [poem]

in #poetry5 years ago (edited)

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The last trace of wind,
a whisper of truth
it is extinguished in the stiff valley
along to all wisdom.
The kind fairy of forest
a flute makes to resonate,
What are the roads for a heart
the knowledge find?
Mother nature moans
after the battle of trees:
her voice intones to consciousness
that only a daring soul
can find it.

After the celestial eclipse,
the tides of the galaxy
they created statues of stars.
Heroes whose marked paths remained
in the space fire floats.
The legend of their odysseys
on earth they were built
by the lights of the fireflies.

Bards sing with vigor
to the spirits among the flowers,
they sing about legends
that shake the branches of trees.
Their voices sing magic
forgotten from before,
who will always remember
to the daring heart that nature pursued
until reaching the eyes for true wisdom
contemplate.
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This poem I have written for my fantasy novel as part of an internal legend of this world. I thought a lot about the old songs sung by the bards of the past, however, the main plot taking place not in a medieval world but in a modern one like ours. And I like the idea of mixing epic fantasy with many other things, coming out of the ordinary. Or so I hope. Of course, my inspirations for this poem have been those great fantasy books that I like, such as The Lord of the Rings, A Song of Ice and Fire, Chronicle of Killer of Kings, The Wheel of Time, among others. I hope that you have been to your liking. The poem itself is a fragment. Some men sing it, others take it as a true legend; some grandmothers and moms have it as a fairy tale that they tell their children and grandchildren before they sleep. The truth is that it could be all those things at once.

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Es bellísimo, aunque, use el traductor, así que lo espero en español :)

El celular se daño... envié pompas de jabón hasta tu ventana, pero el sol las hizo estallar antes de tiempo, lamento mi ausencia, sin embargo, a pesar de que mi cueva tiene tres telarañas y un cucarrón, yo te quiero.

PD. la mezcla de fantasía con otras cosas, es maravillosa, es parte de tu magia gris con avellana.

Pensaba subirlo en español primero, pero por alguna razón, Timeets no me quería abrir. Quizá estaba descansando o algo. Lo subiré en español en breve, es un poquito distinto en algunas palabras.

También he estado ausente por motivo de varios inconvenientes los cuales he podido solucionar. Me toca ponerme al día con varias cositas :3

Besos y abrazos para ti, mi linda @marpa

Te mando la luz del sol en una botella.

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We have to preserve trees and take care of mother nature, beautifully written poem.

Good Job with this poem I liked it a lot

Another lyrical beauty. Plus, I like the idea of it being a part of a fantasy novel. Very much like Tolkien. Good stuff.

Thank you so mouch. Soon I will post more about the novel ;)

This is a lovely poem. It does transport the reader in a gentle way to a mythic realm. A few lines stand out especially--They erected statues of stars, and the first two lines. But the charm of the poem is that it creates a mood. Definitely can see someone singing this.

I love worldbuilding and when the elements used to build the world are art within themselves, it's even better. Excellent writing and a pleasure to read!

~ Mako

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