My Original Poem - Fault of life

in #poetry7 years ago


The mother said the meridian
Do not lay down any unknown place. 

At the end of the evening returned home,
Severe body shaking with fever. 

I’m from another time
There will remove the wild nature. 

You said you would meet in the afternoon,
Like I said, I’m a little old-fashioned,
I’m disappointed for the period
But heart of the eternal love. 

He did not come in the afternoon in anger
I’m facing the same train you.
Only the transfer of the familiar faces
That happiness are well known to me. 

Time is not the time to understand what I have
Following false mirage at the back of the blind. 


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eternal love! Nice poem man!

Good poem, thank you for this ;)

Good poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Good poem I appreciate your efforts man keep it up waiting for your another post keep posting :)

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Beautiful poem dear friend @royalmacro very original, congratulations for this magnificent work, I admire the talent you have to write

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