Always awesome poem. Your diction, how can you choose beatiful word and full of meaning. I comment with this

when the sky sends news
our existence is only temporary
we do not want to hear because of greed
we want the diving is on top
we know there will be no fixed positions at the top
there is a time to roll over and fall
until we are at the nadir
that's when we know how precious life is
though not necessarily successful everything
there are times when we can not be proud to be the boss
there must be a time when it must be a point and there is a time when crossing the bridge of success
we just want to choose falling fall or just sit
even with the swish of the wind can knock down arrogance
even with rain drops can knock out success
if we forget that everything is just a deposit from the omnipotent

warm regard from Central Java _ Indonesia